Tuesday, July 19, 2011

The Chronic Challenge: Relapse the Time of Fate

I was inspired to write this story when I lost my wallet...

This is a story of a ordinary guy called Leon. One day, he was having his meal alone as usual, but he left his wallet carelessly. It was after 30 minutes when he realised it. When he went back to the cafeteria, it had already long gone. He quickly rushed out of the place, hoping to bump onto the person picking his wallet. He did not even care where was he going, or the things around him. Suddenly, he heard a honk and when he realised he was actually standing on a road, it was too late. Then, a white light blinded his sight...

When he regained his sight, he found himself not standing on the road anymore. The place around made him felt like as if he was already in heaven. Then, a God-like person appeared before him. He called himself Repeatel. He could send Leon back to the time before he lost his wallet. However, he had to fulfill certain missions in order to have the privilege. Leon needed to stop one of the gods called Fatel. He was the god that looked after the fate of each person. If necessary, he would step in to make changes to the fate of anybody who did unforgivable things. But he had been up to mischief lately and started to twist the fate of most people he was in charge. Stopping him sounded easy, but in fact Fatel was a tough opponent. Hence, Repeatel granted Leon power and gave him the title Time Reaper.


"You will be given the Power of Time. But in exchange you will need to put your life at risk."
"Will you help me?"
"Will you?"

These were the sentence emphasized by Repeatel.

As a Time Reaper, Leon had the abilities to grant any people with the same power as well. This allowed Leon to build up his army. Of course, after the whole journey, their memories and their powers would be erased.

Leon started his first mission to help those people whom fate was twisted by Fatel. He went back in time to stop the chain of events that led to the change of that person fate. The second victim was a friend of Leon, Terry. Leon revealed himself when helping Terry. Carrying the heart of justice, Terry agreed to join in the force. And so, the two of them team up and made their force bigger.

Fatel had known the existence of Time Reaper ever since Leon tried to revert the changes he made on the second time. He could not tolerate any longer. This time, he decided to make the biggest change on someone whom Leon had admired for so long, Janice.

It was the last Time Battle for Leon. Leon and his team came face-to-face with Fatel. However, Fatel was too powerful and soon only Leon and Terry were the last one standing. The others were badly injured to fight anymore. They passed all their remaining powers over to both of them. With the Greatest Power of Chronic, they finally vanquished Fatel.

However, they were shocked to see the true identity of Fatel was actually Repeatel!!! Repeatel was grateful to Leon and his friends. He was, in fact, possessed by the evil spirit which escaped from the Hades. He used his last few ounce of power to regain his true self, so that he could find someone to free him from the evil spirit. After he gave Leon the power, he was possessed again and became Fatel. Repeatel was glad that he did not choose the wrong person. With that, everyone had their powers and memories erased and was sent back to the moment before he lost his wallet...

Leon returned to the road when he was about to get crash by the car. But the car stopped just in time and the driver shouted at him before driving off. Leon paused for a moment and realised he was on his way to the cafeteria to have his lunch. When he reached there, he queued to get his food. He took out his wallet, and found some dark-feather like thing that did not belong to him. So he just flicked it somewhere. The feather-like thing flown onto someone's handphone, but it was seen possessing the item and it gave out a dark aura.

The owner left the cateferia without the phone. When he realised he lost it, he went panicky and he was seen getting knocked down by a car.........

"You will be given the Power of Time. But in exchange you will need to put your life at risk."
"Will you help me?"
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"Will you?"

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